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Magazine poster
Magazine poster
To cluttered need to space out writing as it looks to
compact and confusing to the audience
Improved better structure- make more space better layout
More insight into Electrio more of a promotion of our film
Inserted created images instead of using original images to
improve marks
Images of other films make it make more authentic however
use our own productions instead of these online images
Three different fonts- change cartoon font looks un
professional and random doesn’t fit with magazine, doesn't fit with other fonts
gives a different feel to the audience more childish less serious and dramatic
The layout is fuller
The target audience – teenagers- youthful
Title is effective and tag line is appropriate and looks
professional
Banner faded effect looks effective
Images look effective however there not our material need to
create own images and material- add snapshots of our own created films to
promote them.
Electrio title looks effective and suits the lightning in
the background
Make magazine price smaller to fit other information so that
it’s like professional magazines
Change bottom left magazine details, give reader a better
idea of what to expect in the magazine, give more information.
Misspelt denero./ change to Denero talks- Jamie bell is a
dad needs to change seems like something in a celebrity magazine not a film
magazine. Tom cruise sub line is
effective can be kept however say what his new film is.
Poster
Title text looks really professional
Facebook and twitter references give a professional standard
using social media to promote our film
Credit block looks professional however names need to be
changed
Need to add website of film
Eyes have changed gives audience a defined understanding of
the difference in characters
Add impulse into production companies to reference to our
film company
Add apostrophe to Storms punctuation mistakes
Much more professional
Synergy across products needs to be thought about maybe keep
fonts similar
Add a spark of after effect onto the end of our title –
gleam or charge running through it to emphasis the title being linked to
lightning and electricity.
