Thursday 28 March 2013

Film Trailer 1st Draft and feedback

Feedback: Teaser trailer




Positive
Introduction of the teaser looks good with the impulse inc
Technique good
Excellent music choice – Dramatic music at the start builds up tension and the music gives the film a more action feel.
Sound effects work well with visuals.
Titles and voiceover look realistic, makes it seem more professional.
Links with print tasks.

Negative
Tone down the sound as it sounds really loud and bassy.
Speed up of the run as it looks like something out of a comedy
Establish more of a conflict between the antagonist and protagonist.
Production companies sound effect looks like it shouldn’t be there.
Weather man isnt in sync with what he is saying at the start

Improvements
Tone down the sound as it is too loud.
Alter the speed of the run of Callum and Tom as it looks like something out of benny hill.
Car crash scene doesn’t work too well where it goes pitch black.
Get rid of the flash sound effect at the start doesn’t belong there.
Need to make the audio in synce with the weatherman.

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