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 Magazine poster

To cluttered need to space out writing as it looks to compact and confusing to the audience

Improved better structure- make more space better layout

More insight into Electrio more of a promotion of our film

Inserted created images instead of using original images to improve marks

Images of other films make it make more authentic however use our own productions instead of these online images

Three different fonts- change cartoon font looks un professional and random doesn’t fit with magazine, doesn't fit with other fonts gives a different feel to the audience more childish less serious and dramatic

The layout is fuller

The target audience – teenagers- youthful

Title is effective and tag line is appropriate and looks professional

Banner faded effect looks effective

Images look effective however there not our material need to create own images and material- add snapshots of our own created films to promote them.

Electrio title looks effective and suits the lightning in the background

Make magazine price smaller to fit other information so that it’s like professional magazines

Change bottom left magazine details, give reader a better idea of what to expect in the magazine, give more information.

Misspelt denero./ change to Denero talks- Jamie bell is a dad needs to change seems like something in a celebrity magazine not a film magazine.  Tom cruise sub line is effective can be kept however say what his new film is.

Poster

Title text looks really professional

Facebook and twitter references give a professional standard using social media to promote our film

Credit block looks professional however names need to be changed

Need to add website of film

Eyes have changed gives audience a defined understanding of the difference in characters

Add impulse into production companies to reference to our film company

Add apostrophe to Storms punctuation mistakes

Much more professional

Synergy across products needs to be thought about maybe keep fonts similar

Add a spark of after effect onto the end of our title – gleam or charge running through it to emphasis the title being linked to lightning and electricity.