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Poster

Add credit block to add conventions of professional film poster
Change the Logo – add production companies so that it mirrors conventions on professional film poster

Change the font as it gives the audience mixed concepts; instead add a font that relates more to lightning and electricity

Add distribution and Production Company.

                                                                    Magazine cover
Uneven layout change the layout so that is more of a structured layout that is clearly laid out and looks professional instead of a layout that is all over the place and fonts are at different sizes

Tone down the  teeth as they look to white as the colour has been enhanced, so dull down the contrast so the teeth aren’t so eye catching

Change bar code so that it is more of an appropriate size and it is in the conventional place of other popular and professional film magazines

Change date (Issue number or monthly mag?) so that it seems like it’s part of many issues and to create the sense of a mainstream film magazine that is on sale to the public

Change ‘First glance’ to Preview so that it is allot clearer what your poster is actually going to consist of.

Add apostrophe to “cinemas’s” so that it is spell correct and there are no punctuation mistakes in our poster is that it is more like a professional standard magazine

Storms into the cinemas – change ‘prepare for the Electrio storm’

Kick ass 2 change- add your own created images and films otherwise it is taking original copyrighted images

Prices- need to be added so that the audience know how much the magazine costs and so that we are following the conventions of professional film magazines

Change the sentence about the interview to something that is much clearer for the audience to understand so they know exactly what is in the magazine if they were to purchase it.