Electronic evaluation: Part four

Electronic evaluation: Part three

Electronic evaluation: Part two

Electronic Evaluation: Part one

Additional Feedback print tasks

Feedback

 Magazine poster

To cluttered need to space out writing as it looks to compact and confusing to the audience

Improved better structure- make more space better layout

More insight into Electrio more of a promotion of our film

Inserted created images instead of using original images to improve marks

Images of other films make it make more authentic however use our own productions instead of these online images

Three different fonts- change cartoon font looks un professional and random doesn’t fit with magazine, doesn't fit with other fonts gives a different feel to the audience more childish less serious and dramatic

The layout is fuller

The target audience – teenagers- youthful

Title is effective and tag line is appropriate and looks professional

Banner faded effect looks effective

Images look effective however there not our material need to create own images and material- add snapshots of our own created films to promote them.

Electrio title looks effective and suits the lightning in the background

Make magazine price smaller to fit other information so that it’s like professional magazines

Change bottom left magazine details, give reader a better idea of what to expect in the magazine, give more information.

Misspelt denero./ change to Denero talks- Jamie bell is a dad needs to change seems like something in a celebrity magazine not a film magazine.  Tom cruise sub line is effective can be kept however say what his new film is.

Poster

Title text looks really professional

Facebook and twitter references give a professional standard using social media to promote our film

Credit block looks professional however names need to be changed

Need to add website of film

Eyes have changed gives audience a defined understanding of the difference in characters

Add impulse into production companies to reference to our film company

Add apostrophe to Storms punctuation mistakes

Much more professional

Synergy across products needs to be thought about maybe keep fonts similar

Add a spark of after effect onto the end of our title – gleam or charge running through it to emphasis the title being linked to lightning and electricity.

Feedback of print tasks

Feedback

Poster

Add credit block to add conventions of professional film poster
Change the Logo – add production companies so that it mirrors conventions on professional film poster

Change the font as it gives the audience mixed concepts; instead add a font that relates more to lightning and electricity

Add distribution and Production Company.

                                                                    Magazine cover
Uneven layout change the layout so that is more of a structured layout that is clearly laid out and looks professional instead of a layout that is all over the place and fonts are at different sizes

Tone down the  teeth as they look to white as the colour has been enhanced, so dull down the contrast so the teeth aren’t so eye catching

Change bar code so that it is more of an appropriate size and it is in the conventional place of other popular and professional film magazines

Change date (Issue number or monthly mag?) so that it seems like it’s part of many issues and to create the sense of a mainstream film magazine that is on sale to the public

Change ‘First glance’ to Preview so that it is allot clearer what your poster is actually going to consist of.

Add apostrophe to “cinemas’s” so that it is spell correct and there are no punctuation mistakes in our poster is that it is more like a professional standard magazine

Storms into the cinemas – change ‘prepare for the Electrio storm’

Kick ass 2 change- add your own created images and films otherwise it is taking original copyrighted images

Prices- need to be added so that the audience know how much the magazine costs and so that we are following the conventions of professional film magazines

Change the sentence about the interview to something that is much clearer for the audience to understand so they know exactly what is in the magazine if they were to purchase it.

Evaluation planning

Skills progression

Film Trailer 1st Draft and feedback

Feedback: Teaser trailer

Positive
Introduction of the teaser looks good with the impulse inc
Technique good
Excellent music choice – Dramatic music at the start builds up tension and the music gives the film a more action feel.

Sound effects work well with visuals.

Titles and voiceover look realistic, makes it seem more professional.
Links with print tasks.

Negative
Tone down the sound as it sounds really loud and bassy.
Speed up of the run as it looks like something out of a comedy
Establish more of a conflict between the antagonist and protagonist.
Production companies sound effect looks like it shouldn’t be there.
Weather man isnt in sync with what he is saying at the start

Improvements
Tone down the sound as it is too loud.
Alter the speed of the run of Callum and Tom as it looks like something out of benny hill.
Car crash scene doesn’t work too well where it goes pitch black.
Get rid of the flash sound effect at the start doesn’t belong there.

Need to make the audio in synce with the weatherman.

Finished 'Electrio' Poster

This is our final draft for our Ancillary task

Fonts used - 'Richter' for the Film title and phrase and 'Simple tongs'  for all the other text.

Improvements from last draft
Underlined the main information such as the title, phrase and when the film is out in theatres.
Changed the credit block as some of the character in the last draft were comical.
Made all the characters eyes more red and prominent.

Technology used in our production

Finished Poster analysis

Film teaser trailer ideas

Finished Magazine Cover

Influential Posters

You can see the similarties between these two poster and our final product which features many aspects of these two magazine covers.

Magazine analysis

Influential Posters