You haven't improved this, Callum. Your analysis is mostly simplistic e.g. "They have used big text to make it clear what the magazine is called", uses little terminology and replies on opinion e.g. "I think this magazine is very good" and vague statements e.g. "The reason for this wording is because it catches your eye and then it makes you want to know the reason why this was said, so it makes you want to read the magazine". If you follow my advice and read the analysis guides I have provided for you, then you will find it a quite straightforward task to analyse a print task and you will produce a much higher quality research item.
Feedback given in class 27/11/12. See my blog for further analytical tips (under 'print' tab).
ReplyDeleteYou haven't improved this, Callum. Your analysis is mostly simplistic e.g. "They have used big text to make it clear what the magazine is called", uses little terminology and replies on opinion e.g. "I think this magazine is very good" and vague statements e.g. "The reason for this wording is because it catches your eye and then it makes you want to know the reason why this was said, so it makes you want to read the magazine". If you follow my advice and read the analysis guides I have provided for you, then you will find it a quite straightforward task to analyse a print task and you will produce a much higher quality research item.
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