"cinemas's"??? "Robert De Niro retired legend" ??? "First Glance" At what?
Is this a serious attempt at a finished front cover? Have you sought any feedback from other groups? Tom should be providing guidance on the use of English. Ellis can use his Photoshop ability to construct it. Callum should identify conventions to follow. You need to work as a team and work more consistently. Too much time is wasted talking about social events outside of school!
"cinemas's"???
ReplyDelete"Robert De Niro retired legend" ???
"First Glance" At what?
Is this a serious attempt at a finished front cover? Have you sought any feedback from other groups? Tom should be providing guidance on the use of English. Ellis can use his Photoshop ability to construct it. Callum should identify conventions to follow. You need to work as a team and work more consistently. Too much time is wasted talking about social events outside of school!